A Poem to thank for all the support
I would like to extend a special thanks to everyone who read and enjoyed my writing. I had never thought that the poem would garner such responses from people who are into writing for so many years.
Life is never straight because it’s always a learning curve. Learning from your own experience as well as from the experienced lot around you smoothens one’s endeavour. Thanks to all of you for your kind
words and heaps of praise once again…
Satyananda
Here is the poem
Learning how to learn
A heart so ignorant, so idle,
away from learning, it strays,
for life’s a box of unsolved riddle,
a darkness kept away from piercing rays.
The bees hum, tracking a honey bloom,
learn they do, when they sweat,
to survive a scare of gloom,
needs each of us, a happiness gate.
To learn, a lifetime won’t suffice,
for a mortal, who lives too small,
and a good one it does entice,
with a force of the nature’s call.
Born they are, the real men,
when the dusk meets the dawn,
the lustre their souls retain,
for ages after they are gone.
Thank you, Satyananda for your Poem
I am happy that I could introduce you, a talented young poet, here and hope you will continue
to write poems and stories. Always be you!
Hi Satyananda,
It’s fantastic and really appreciate your tallent..
Don’t stop write poems, instead keep writing poems like these and improve yourself.
Special thanks to Ericka for shared this poem and encourage youngsters.
Keep up this good work guys.
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Hi Thyrone ,
just found your comment in spam .
Thank you for your encouraging words
I will give your words to Satyananda
he will appreciate it .
Thank you for your comment
Erika
Ah .. beautiful very nice and true … thank you Satyananda…
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Hi Lesly,
I thank you in the name of Satyanada .
He graduated in Bachelors in Electrical Engineering this June
and is in an exam right now .He will be pleased to see the comments .
Thank you
Erika
Hi, Satyananda
Poem is not exactly my field, but when I read with slower space, I can appreciate its beauty.
Was it your first try? If so, I would like to encourage you to continue with your talent.
Can’t wait to read your next production,
-Stella
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Hi Stella ,
I thank you in the name of Satyananda.
He will be very happy to hear you find him talented and he really is.
Right now he has his exam and graduated in Bachelors in Electrical Engineering this June.
He sure will continue to write and is ambitious about .
We thank you for your comment Stella
Erika
Wonderful poem, Satyananda… I appreciate Erika inviting you to share it, here.
It invokes some memories of St. John’s “Dark Night Of The Soul,” which might be a spiritual counterpart to this.
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Hi David ,
We are happy you liked Satyananda’s poem .
His friends say his poems remind on Robert Frost 🙂
I told him to be himself and not compare to anybody else .
I think he is amazing ,not only in writing ,he just has his exams and
graduated in Bachelors in Electrical Engineering this June.
And 3 of his research papers got selected by international journal.
A amazing talented young man .
Thank you
Erika
Hi Erika and Satyananda,
What a beautiful poem and thank you, Erika for sharing it with us. You are so gracious to share the works of new writers on your blog.
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Hi Monna ,
thank you and Satyananda will be happy you liked his poem .
I really think he is a talent . Right now he is in his exams ,the final year ,
graduated in Bachelors in Electrical Engineering this June. I think we will
hear from him .He told me: A publishing house will pick 3 authors for a short story book
and: The national daily here undertook a campaign for upcoming writers.. A short story contest every month
Best selling writers in every month give you some lines, you have to make a story on that.
He hopes to get in one of this .
Thank you
Erika
and
Hi Erika, your friend has so much talent. I’m really enjoying reading his poetry. This one is really penetrating. Great job, Satya.
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Hi BG,
thank you ,he will be happy to hear this . I too think he is a talent . Right now he is his exam final year,
he graduated in Bachelors in Electrical Engineering this June. 3 of his research papers selected by international journal.
After exam he may participate in a writer contest ,the national daily there has this contest .
A really talented and ambitious young man .
Thank you Brenda
Erika
Hello Satyananda,
The poem is simply superb. The third stanza
” To learn, a lifetime won’t suffice,
for a mortal, who lives too small,
and a good one it does entice,
with a force of the nature’s call.”
I liked it very much.
Thank you for sharing such sweet words…
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Hi Basharath ,
I thank you in the name of Satyananda,
He is happy you liked the poem a,the part you liked is really
meaningful .
Satyananda and me thank you very much for the comment.
Erika
thanks for this article
this is very helpful for me great
Hi Nikhil,
I am happy you found this helpful article for yourself
and hope it benefits you .
Thanks for the visit
Erika
Nice effort.. No one is perfect.. practice makes man perfect
Right ,practice is needed 🙂
Satyananda is in between published in books and Magazines.
He is doing great
Thanks for the visit